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Conrad Rice

  • Short Story » General, General Re: October Afternoons

    Wow, after all these long and detailed reviews I come along with my shrunken opinion. I really like the ideas discussed in this story, memory and the passage of time ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ragnarok

    This was a very well written story. The imagery was very beautiful and I liked it a lot. However, I never understood if this was a girl in a post-apocalyptic ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Sight.

    This was a very moving story. The feelings of the narrator were well-conveyed and I liked that. Have you considered using more well-developed paragraphs perhaps? That might make the story ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted

    This was a very interesting story, to say the least. I rather liked the main character. He seemed to have a genuine realness to him, if you'll pardon the redundancy. ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Laurel's Lament

    I liked it better than I thought I would at first. You started off with Laurel down on everybody and had me expecting an ending quite different than the one ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lit

    You reviewed one of my stories so I decided to return the favor. I really don't understand what this is about. Just what is Set out to do, and why ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Fool's Duel: Changers

    I really liked this story. Personally, the British style of speaking did nothing for me, but other than that the dialogue was okay. The basic premise was excellent, though a ...

    Apr 16, 2008


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