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Re: October Afternoons
Wow, after all these long and detailed reviews I come along with my shrunken opinion. I really like the ideas discussed in this story, memory and the passage of time ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Ragnarok
This was a very well written story. The imagery was very beautiful and I liked it a lot. However, I never understood if this was a girl in a post-apocalyptic ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Sight.
This was a very moving story. The feelings of the narrator were well-conveyed and I liked that. Have you considered using more well-developed paragraphs perhaps? That might make the story ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
This was a very interesting story, to say the least. I rather liked the main character. He seemed to have a genuine realness to him, if you'll pardon the redundancy. ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Laurel's Lament
I liked it better than I thought I would at first. You started off with Laurel down on everybody and had me expecting an ending quite different than the one ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Lit
You reviewed one of my stories so I decided to return the favor. I really don't understand what this is about. Just what is Set out to do, and why ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Fool's Duel: Changers
I really liked this story. Personally, the British style of speaking did nothing for me, but other than that the dialogue was okay. The basic premise was excellent, though a ...
Apr 16, 2008
